Gold Fissure
My mind splits
Free hemisphere
Just then
A Presence hung
On a folding chair
I murdered
Five spiders there
In the corner
Mother of Pearl
Duality reveled
Above my bower
Unannounced
D. A. 4/11/09
About Me
- D. A.
- I'm a grad student who enjoys poetry. Perhaps keeping a little blog will pressure me to compose on a regular basis.
i like this one, i like all the packed images, i see a room, it seems intimate and pretty. i guess lines like, "duality revealed" and "my mind splits/free hemisphere"...i can see how they seem related, but they are kind of abstract. i like the line "my mind splits," but i'm not sure if/how you want to connect the splitting/dality ideas. maybe just give me more, more information about this concept, what duality is revealed, show me with words.
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